Sunday 6 September 2009

STORY PLAN COMPLETED!!!

The story plan is completed!

I have now taken out everything to do with 'Prince of Persia', meaning this story is now completely ORIGINAL!!! So here it is...



The year is 1191

The King of Babylon, Zeruss, was found impregnating a companion. Having told no-one, and realizing the ruin if news escaped, the King banished the companion and her new born son.
Companion = A whore.
**MEANWHILE**
The king of Ahzad, Hajira, had a baron wife. Failing to gain a son, this king decided to look elsewhere for an heir. The dying companion was taken in and her son was adopted by Hajira and his wife. The son’s name became Akron, and he would be the next ruler of Ahzad.
The vizier would have ruled in Hajira’s place, but Akron intruded. The vizier decides to wipe Akron’s memory and send him up the Tigris River, telling the king he has died in a hunting accident.
Spending most of his time in the city of Nissib, Akron finds Darial, an old court jester from Babylon who has been banished for studying magic*. A deal is made. Akron will look after Darial and Darial will help Akron remember his past.
**an ability to read minds in this era receives this title.
During this time, Akron rescues Talia.
Talia’s father, is caught stealing (a crime he did not actually commit) and the shop keeper instantly kills him. Now, he plans to kill the man’s daughter. Akron rushes in (remember, he has been trained in the king’s palace) and rescues her.
Now there is a price on both their heads.
Akron eventually remembers about the vizier, his step father and the fate of his land. He must return to Ahzad!
He and his new friend Talia must work together and travel over vast deserts, jungles and other dangers to return to Ahzad and rescue the city from the evil rule of the vizier.
The Vizier’s name shall be… Ishaq.


All it needs now is a title! :)

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